Visions: Prelude
** STORY UPDATE OUT NOW! **
Visions: Prelude is an introduction into the world of 'Visions'. A robust living city that lives in the eye of the storm, contained from all sides by the darklands. A perpetually dark area filled with nothing but dark skies and sand.
Uncover the mystery of how the thriving city, with no connection to any worlds, continue to prosper.
Why do the Steel Arrows pass through the skies? And why do they exist?
As the most recent Steel Arrow falls to the ground, what lurks in the arrow's hull? You know what it is, don't you?
Visions: Prelude is an Experiment by Heart & Soul Games. Join us on our journey into interactive fiction. What you see before you is a prototype, just to get the word out.
A full 'Visions' desktop experience is set for development, based on your feed back. We look forward to what you have to say.
And remember,
"What did you hear?"
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I think it needs more backstory before diving into the first decision. I wouldn't think that a crashing sound is even slightly worthy of investigating when I know there are storm clouds, because it's probably thunder, and the choice made no sense at all to me. But after playing through, it seems apparent that the MC is already fully aware of what the crash is even without investigating it and it definitely isn't thunder. But the player isn't aware of that. We have so much less information than the MC and can't make informed choices.
Hey @MarloweC thanks for taking the time to play it through.
Playing it back, I understand your concerns, and I'll will expand the introduction more. As well as expand some of the other options available.
Thank you for your taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.
Hiya! I updated the game, made it longer with more meaningful choices and two separate endings!
Thanks for your feedback from last time, and I hope these offer better insight into the characters, and let me know if it meets your expectations.
Let me know if you'd like to see more of this world, I'm currently using this prototype to gauge interest!
Thanks for your time!